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Re: Re: PP
Thanks for reading!
posted by
mesmerized1970
on July 1, 2017 at 12:52 AM
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Re: PP
details
posted by
anib
on June 27, 2017 at 11:35 PM
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PP
Well written, good in detatls!
posted by
anib
on June 27, 2017 at 11:35 PM
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thanks for your feedback! I'll definitely take that into consideration
posted by
mesmerized1970
on June 24, 2017 at 3:53 PM
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I think the story is great but I personally would start with the paragraph about that night
posted by
Annicita
on June 24, 2017 at 2:49 PM
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Thanks for the feedback
posted by
mesmerized1970
on June 22, 2017 at 8:46 PM
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A well written story, you managed to cram a lot into the first chapter, interesting.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 22, 2017 at 10:08 AM
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