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Marcie sounds like she had an axe to grind with him...what a shame!

posted by Annicita on May 18, 2017 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

excellent as one has come to expect from our Pat.

posted by Kabu on May 18, 2017 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

Quick movers here, good start Pat.

posted by C_C_T on May 18, 2017 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply

Pat

Well described. Wrong decisions may have far-reaching, unintended consequences that change people's lives; as do right ones at times...

posted by Nautikos on May 18, 2017 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply