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Re: Re: Re: Kabu

You're one cool chick, in any century, dear Kabu!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 7, 2017 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Well, Naut, thanks for reading it and coming back to comment. Always love your comments. You're right, in most aspects of life I am very cautious! When I write these poems, there is a free-flow in which I indulge. Also, I don't even read most contemporary poetry, though good poetry of any period is an art. Consider this perhaps; one could say it is not I in totality who is reflected in my poems, but small facets, enhanced by the words and phrases I use, which is a craft that may or may not border on art. Hopefully, it does, at times touch art. Besides, poems about washing dishes or getting the mail would be far too...borr-rring. LOL. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 7, 2017 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

20th century ...jazz and sure... Gypsy girl

posted by Kabu on March 7, 2017 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

RP

I read it before - and I like it's sense of 'wild abandon'; but I didn't comment then because I've come to see you differently, and I'm trying to reconcile the way I see you with the way you show yourself in your poetry - far more cautious...

posted by Nautikos on March 7, 2017 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Thank you, Annicita. I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate your comments. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 7, 2017 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

CC, I was making a joke! Actually, I was so overwhelmed by your words, how nice they were, that I was shocked and humbled. I thought, "Wow, he liked it!" My humor can be rather dry, I suppose. Thank you again for coming back and telling me. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 7, 2017 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

this poem paints colorful imagery with each line...well done!

posted by Annicita on March 7, 2017 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: RPresta

How funny RP. If I seem less than enthusiastic it does not mean that I do not enjoy your work. I usually look at it and come back much later. I only think warmly of you always.

posted by C_C_T on March 6, 2017 at 11:46 PM | link to this | reply

Re: tAPS

Thanks, TAPS! I love it too, but then, I love most all music. There is probably some great music playing in your area! Glad you enjoyed the poem. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 6, 2017 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

A bit. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 6, 2017 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thanks, sam, very much. Glad that you liked it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 6, 2017 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re:WileyJohn

I'll bet you hear music in the trees, the sky, the air, Wiley! And Kabu, too! Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 6, 2017 at 10:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

You get it, I can tell. Thank you, S. Sister. Jazz and Gypsies, some parallels there, perhaps. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 6, 2017 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Wow, my goodness, such kind words are a shock, and a welcome surprise. Does this mean you liked it, then? I thought perhaps no folks thought it any good... My deepest gratitude, indeed. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 6, 2017 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Quite a nice compliment from you, FSI! Thank you very much. So glad you liked it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 6, 2017 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

I love jazz.  I have many favorites.  And I love this poem.

posted by TAPS. on March 6, 2017 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Revealing

posted by BC-A on March 6, 2017 at 5:31 PM | link to this | reply

Well done! A little allure still remains, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on March 6, 2017 at 5:18 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

I could hear the jazz behind that lovely poetry.

posted by WileyJohn on March 6, 2017 at 10:35 AM | link to this | reply

My musician son plaid a lot of Jazz at one time. I really understand your words. And on another level it absolutely reads of my Gypsy poet S. Sister.

posted by Kabu on March 6, 2017 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply

RP. It is really your best, of course you must have felt like this at one time. All people do,

never mind that which follows. I don't quite see how you can work a horse into this one.

  Today you have become beautiful.

posted by C_C_T on March 6, 2017 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

An excellent soul-baring poem, I find this to be. Kudos for a great job writing it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 6, 2017 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply