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Re: BC-A
Oh, perhaps. I think some women are like the sea. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 2, 2017 at 11:38 AM
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Re:WileyJohn
I appreciate that, Wiley. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 2, 2017 at 11:36 AM
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Re: FSI
Good one, FSI!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 2, 2017 at 11:36 AM
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Re: Lanetay
Thanks, Lanetay. Yes, butterfly would work there, also. Good point.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 2, 2017 at 11:35 AM
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RPresta
So well done
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 2, 2017 at 11:35 AM
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Re: CCT
Thank you, CC. Glad you liked it and liked the ending.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 2, 2017 at 11:34 AM
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Re: sam444
Thanks, sam. It was written after thinking about the changing colors of the sea. It interesting how each interprets in their own way, isn't it?
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 2, 2017 at 11:33 AM
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Sisters sisters never has there been such a set of sisters love.
posted by
BC-A
on March 2, 2017 at 9:49 AM
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What a wonderful tribute to your sister.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 2, 2017 at 9:31 AM
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interesting poem I was thinking butterfly
posted by
Lanetay
on March 2, 2017 at 8:43 AM
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A good piece of workmanship RP. I like the style and of course the twist. Well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2017 at 7:14 AM
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Re:Aba
Thanks, Aba. I'm glad you enjoyed the idea and the poem. I like the terminology you have used here. Good one! Thank you, but me, a poetess? 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 1, 2017 at 9:07 PM
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Enriching imagery throughout! If you didn't say what was going on at the end it could have been anything the reader would want! And it still can if one desired! I kept thinking agonizing mental turmoil as I was reading! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 1, 2017 at 8:45 PM
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sanguinity
posted by
anib
on March 1, 2017 at 8:28 PM
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Presta
I feel it a great idea that you could personalize the sea as your sister and express it so well in your Gypsy-style poetry. Ay, is it not pantheism or let's call it sanguinPity. All the same, a great job! Kudos, again my poetess
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anib
on March 1, 2017 at 8:28 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Thanks, Wiley! That's a beautiful thing to say.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 1, 2017 at 6:56 PM
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Re: TAPS
I know the moods of the sea vary, and I think that's often why sailors and most other people in general think of it in the feminine, so my mind took it one step further. I'm so glad you like the poem, TAPS.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 1, 2017 at 6:56 PM
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RPresta
That is very beautiful love
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 1, 2017 at 4:44 PM
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I don't think I have ever thought of the sea being likened to a sister. I like your poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 1, 2017 at 4:38 PM
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Re: Annicita
Thank you, Annicita.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 1, 2017 at 3:02 PM
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Re: kABU
Indeed. Aha, I had to smile. I know that gaze, but I have never had the guts to say anything to anyone... LOL! Thank you, dear S. Sister. Thank you. And I'm glad it cheered you, as you comments certainly cheers this soul today.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 1, 2017 at 3:02 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on March 1, 2017 at 2:55 PM
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PS...
Oh yes, you cheered me thank you. xx
posted by
Kabu
on March 1, 2017 at 2:01 PM
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We are truly S. Sisters. I have always told people who usually gaze back at me with blank eyes, that I came out of the sea. This poem is you in everyway that I see you in my heart. Swirling, dancing, to be feared loved and respected according to your moods. Adorned with bright and beautiful baubles that enhance your hair, your figure, the you, Gypsy restless woman that I have come to love.
posted by
Kabu
on March 1, 2017 at 1:59 PM
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