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Re: FS
Good think FS. i must remember that.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 18, 2017 at 2:04 AM
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Re: Kabu
Yes it makes one realize the power behind simple things when they are not controlled.
I could put a witty remark here, but I like you too much.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 18, 2017 at 2:03 AM
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Well I am glad you did not fall in Taps , glad you feel better.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 18, 2017 at 1:58 AM
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Re:Sam
Cheers Sam, hope all is well
posted by
C_C_T
on February 18, 2017 at 1:56 AM
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Thank you A. The ones that live in river banks are the tough guys of the Vole species.
My fault I should have said Water Vole.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 18, 2017 at 1:55 AM
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Re: C_C_T
A bit too near the knuckle for you RP. I suppose one never finds out the disadvantages of living in Paradise until one is there. Please be careful.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 18, 2017 at 1:50 AM
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C_C_T
A superb poem. We have a huge dam here that has had to have water released. It is compromised and poses a threat. Hope the lily finds a home, also. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 17, 2017 at 9:53 PM
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I had to look up the meaning of vole...never knew that was another word for a field mouse
posted by
Annicita
on February 17, 2017 at 6:00 PM
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Another excellent poem! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 17, 2017 at 5:43 PM
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Great! Wonderfully written. You definitely put me right there.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 17, 2017 at 4:04 PM
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You have truly written the picture to perfection. Have watched this happen.
posted by
Kabu
on February 17, 2017 at 1:58 PM
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I like how you set up your poem with different-sized stanzas and a different font at the end. This is the sort of poem with a concept that works best without strict stanza rules.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 17, 2017 at 9:32 AM
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