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Re: Re: Re: Nice message
So instead of using so many words use the you're instead of you are.Right????Thanks alot sam.
posted by
Roughneck
on February 21, 2017 at 2:05 AM
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Re: Re: Nice message
What she is trying to tell you is that you used your (possessive case, actually secon person possessive case adjective or simply means something belonging to someone and usually followed by a noun) instead of the contraction you're (which is you are, ). I hope this helps! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 20, 2017 at 9:35 AM
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Re: Nice message
Thanks for the positve input but im not sure exactly what your telling me.
posted by
Roughneck
on February 19, 2017 at 10:05 PM
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Great words
posted by
spiderfly
on February 18, 2017 at 5:27 AM
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Welcome.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 17, 2017 at 9:23 PM
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welcome to blogit...hope you enjoy it as much as I do!
posted by
Annicita
on February 17, 2017 at 8:54 PM
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Welcome to Blogit! Your poem is so true! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 17, 2017 at 5:53 PM
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Yes hang in there RN.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 17, 2017 at 9:10 AM
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Nice message
I would only add the usage of your and you're needs to be changed, but still a good poem! Welcome to Blogit...
posted by
Katray2
on February 17, 2017 at 7:26 AM
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