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spiderfly
The pom's touch on the pathos enriches it and you topped it well with your
imaginative close. 
posted by
anib
on February 14, 2017 at 9:48 PM
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Nice poem that brings lots of memories 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 14, 2017 at 8:56 PM
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posted by
Kabu
on February 14, 2017 at 5:26 PM
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Building blocks, one at a time; a fitting close and a heart-felt poem. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 14, 2017 at 10:50 AM
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Those were the days.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 14, 2017 at 10:01 AM
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Yes it is so hard to let go and hope they learned all the good things we taught them
posted by
Annicita
on February 14, 2017 at 8:54 AM
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As much as one would like too one has to let go, a lesson all mothers learn I guess. Not being a mother i can only guess. Well written.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 14, 2017 at 7:42 AM
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