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That was magnificient with an awesome, vivid close! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 13, 2017 at 7:30 PM
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I love it!
posted by
Annicita
on February 13, 2017 at 7:08 PM
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Great work!
posted by
Katray2
on February 13, 2017 at 6:52 PM
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spiderfly
I did very much enjoy your poem, and the end was exceptionally nice! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 13, 2017 at 5:33 PM
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This has everything. Such a wonderful romantic fairy tale with happiness at the end. love it.
posted by
Kabu
on February 13, 2017 at 12:11 PM
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There is a lot of symbolism behind the candle.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 13, 2017 at 9:28 AM
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Yes they always look more desirable when in captivity a bit different when in command.
A good fairy tale.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 13, 2017 at 12:41 AM
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