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Re: sam444

Thanks, sam! Glad you thought that it is so.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 7, 2017 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent work! sam

posted by sam444 on February 7, 2017 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re:Aba

Perfectly so, I hope

posted by anib on February 5, 2017 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re:Aba

And a big WOW to you also, dear Aba! Will read you in a bit. Thank you; you read it as it was meant to be read, I believe.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! Dear Presta

'From a bed of midnight darkness she feels his touch/from the mirror of her mind/she sees his deepest dream/from the last beats of her heart,' these lines stood out for me with the opposites of the feeling, so well blended

posted by anib on February 5, 2017 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Katray2

Thank you very much, Katray2!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful, RPresta!

posted by Katray2 on February 5, 2017 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: patmore

Oh, YES I do! Even on Blogit I have seen coincidences several times. Could there be a pattern or theory to the randomness of coincidence? News flash to Blogitsville, the first (and only) little story I ever submitted was sold to a publisher of - get this - ghost stories! Unfortunately, the company was sold before press time and its format changed, so my piece didn't go anywhere, and I was released from contract. Oh, and it was a true story! And no, I am not a person who believes in ghosts! LOL!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you, CC. That's very insightful. I like what you say about the rosebud. Perhaps one could say in reference to a poem like this, "Ever the rosebud has no thorn."

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

FSI, thank you, indeed.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Had to search for that one, 'eh? Thank you very much, really! I'll work on improving my clarity skills... lol!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thanks, Naut!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 10:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Really nice to hear that, Annicita! Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck_ibrahim

Glad you liked it, Chuck. Thank you!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 5, 2017 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: RPresta

Do you believe in coincidences? Yesterday, I started a short story which has echoes of this poem. Provisional title is The Ghost in the Machine. Will take some time (weeks?) before I'm ready to list it.

posted by patmore on February 5, 2017 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

A special someone can complete a person. It is so wonderful.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 5, 2017 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

longing

posted by Nautikos on February 5, 2017 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

RP

A powerful expression of mutual onging...

posted by Nautikos on February 5, 2017 at 6:32 AM | link to this | reply

Yes and in such feelings there is more comfort eventually than mere mortality. Even the rose-bud has no thorn. Well reworked.