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Re: Re: बहुत ही बढ़िया और उमदा , शमाजी।
Oh, cum on 
posted by
anib
on January 23, 2017 at 6:53 PM
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Re: बहुत ही बढ़िया और उमदा , शमाजी।
aapka comment itne sundar shabdon se saja hai ki uske aage meri kavita phiki hai...jai ho!
posted by
shamasehar
on January 23, 2017 at 1:09 AM
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बहुत ही बढ़िया और उमदा , शमाजी।
Hope your yearning to relive that pure moment of childlike innocence now washed away by time, debauched by the influences of wilderness and arid zones, is granted to your utter fulfilment. A poem worth remembering as it sculpts that lost moment in exquisite words. 
posted by
anib
on January 22, 2017 at 10:58 PM
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We all do lovely work!
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 20, 2017 at 2:25 PM
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How wonderful. Fresh dew on the grass and the sun about to shine on a warm smiley day.
posted by
Kabu
on January 19, 2017 at 6:59 AM
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Quite sad but very nicely presented Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 19, 2017 at 1:02 AM
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Excellent! I have been there at one time or another as well! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 18, 2017 at 8:58 PM
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shamasehar
Oh, I love this! It's just so beautifully done. Outstanding! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 18, 2017 at 7:45 PM
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