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posted by
Annicita
on December 30, 2016 at 5:40 PM
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Great. So true to life.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 30, 2016 at 1:38 PM
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Action and romance. Good.
posted by
BC-A
on December 30, 2016 at 10:08 AM
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You do a great job bringing him to life.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 30, 2016 at 9:46 AM
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Doesn't look like his date will enjoy a good meal. Liked it.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2016 at 1:10 AM
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He had a nice destination in mind.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 29, 2016 at 12:26 PM
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such a picture you wrote here i felt cold and miserable along with the lad. Could really see him there. well done.
posted by
Kabu
on December 29, 2016 at 12:17 PM
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