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Is it really obvious that I don't care for many men? I mean I love male company but so many never just wanted to be friends and that spoils so much.

posted by Kabu on December 29, 2016 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

well you could set this up as a prologue and explore just what happened to them years down the road. meeting by chance not even recognising each other. I think I like to see her become the philanthropist and him asking for a dime, skid row as it used to be called.

posted by Kabu on December 29, 2016 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds like your heart isn't in it. Perhaps you would consider coming back to it later? 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 29, 2016 at 12:20 PM | link to this | reply

The story can take so many turns....thinking outside of the box. What kind of twist would throw everybody for a loop?

posted by Annicita on December 29, 2016 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

I know how you feel Pat, just write to please yourself it is a luxury you deserve. It was a bit of fun though

posted by C_C_T on December 29, 2016 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply