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Re: BC-A
What an interesting concept! I love it. Yes, they do, indeed. 
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Sea_Gypsy
on December 30, 2016 at 8:26 PM
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Re: shamasehar
Thanks, shamasehar! True, or they mean them only while they are saying them.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 30, 2016 at 8:25 PM
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People act as do the seasons, i.e. winter.
posted by
BC-A
on December 30, 2016 at 10:09 AM
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Great images. The masks people wear to hide behind and say things they don't mean are disgusting.
posted by
shamasehar
on December 30, 2016 at 3:59 AM
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Re: sam444
Thanks, sam, very much!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 29, 2016 at 9:28 PM
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Powerful opening lines! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 29, 2016 at 8:22 PM
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Re: Annicita
Thanks, Annicita! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 29, 2016 at 8:19 PM
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Re: pendorin
Thank you, pendorin.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 29, 2016 at 8:19 PM
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Re: FSI
Indeed. How true.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 29, 2016 at 8:19 PM
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Re: BC-A
Yes, they can do that, sometimes.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 29, 2016 at 8:18 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Thank you, CC.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 29, 2016 at 8:17 PM
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wonderful!
posted by
Annicita
on December 29, 2016 at 11:43 AM
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Beautifully and Poetically stated!
posted by
pendorin
on December 29, 2016 at 10:04 AM
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I like how the poem leaves us...A poem that I imagine many will find to be relateable.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 29, 2016 at 9:29 AM
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Aah flowers and memories make a love potion.
posted by
BC-A
on December 29, 2016 at 8:59 AM
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An interesting poem I can imagine a young lady writing this in a fit of pique.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 29, 2016 at 12:59 AM
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Re: Aba
I thank you, Aba! It is a little different. Glad you liked it, and yes, one can go many directions with it!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 28, 2016 at 9:36 PM
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I love this poems appeal on the senses. 'Colder than a witches's kiss' compared to which hell's cold feels cozily warm. It is satirical, strengthened with other picturesque images. And the contrast in the last makes for a fine poem, reminding me of Milton's image of Sin, beautiful from waist upwards but with scaly folds below. You have indeed made me go many directionswhichisgood. 
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anib
on December 28, 2016 at 9:22 PM
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Re: Kabu
Love it! I need that hat! I am smiling. Thank you. Sorry about your DIL. Those kinds can make life unpleasant, on a good day!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 28, 2016 at 7:03 PM
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Lycan...somehow this reminds me of my DIL # 2 son's wife!!!
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Kabu
on December 28, 2016 at 5:17 PM
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