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The poem is such a nice play of words and images like the pleats of a skirt :)
posted by
shamasehar
on December 12, 2016 at 4:27 AM
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Re: CCT
Chumpet is one good writer of poems. And a big thank you, as it's more of a compliment than I deserve! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 12, 2016 at 12:42 AM
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Re:Annicita
Not in winter I hope. What pain is suffered for fashion.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 11:48 PM
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Thank you Justi.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 11:47 PM
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Re: Wiley
Thanks Bro.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 11:46 PM
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I remember wearing mini skirts!
posted by
Annicita
on December 11, 2016 at 7:25 PM
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You are such a wonderful writer. Your work takes me to another place I love it.
posted by
Justi
on December 11, 2016 at 1:44 PM
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ChiffChaff
Your poetry is special Bro.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 11, 2016 at 1:31 PM
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Re: FS
I think the weather changes all the time FS. Probably affects the Poles more quickly.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 11:03 AM
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Re: Shobana
Well most mature ladies wear slacks these days. I did like the mini skirts the last lady I saw wearing one was nearly seventy and she looked great.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 11:01 AM
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The world keeps on getting warmer, although right now, we are not feeling it in Maryland...Trying to think straight when we feel various emotions can cause decision making to be tricky.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 11, 2016 at 6:36 AM
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I'm glad you got off with the new poem CC. and yes amidst the perfume and the imagination, the skirt is a great start.
posted by
shobana
on December 11, 2016 at 4:20 AM
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Re: Kabu
How can I lie to you, I was waiting for a delivery from Amazon the progress report on the computer showed it would be delivered 10th. I did not want to lock the porch and waited until nearly 11p.m. If Amazon had said it had been delivered, I would have sent an email telling them it had gone to the wrong address, So while I sat there fuming I just wrote the first scrubby piece and the other was probably a repeat. I shall have to let young Chumpet take over, I think. The parcel never came. It included a child's digging spade I have always wanted one.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 1:31 AM
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Re: Taps
Well I suppose you could give them a rub,I am the worst one for cleaning cars. One supermarket I have stopped going to,because there are about 4 groups of men trying to clean one's car . They only use a spray of some sort which I fear might scratch the paintwork.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 1:20 AM
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Re: Sam
Yes I suppose some refections are the same. Don't fall off your bike.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 1:13 AM
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Re: Pat
I haven't that problem when writing mish mash Pat. It takes more talent to write a book.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 1:11 AM
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Re:PResta
I know RP and now l would rather read your poems than have to write one. I shall have to let Chumpet take over and just do repeats.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 11, 2016 at 1:08 AM
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C_C_T
'....original emotion...' seems like the key to the whole poem. Very interesting, CC!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 10, 2016 at 8:44 PM
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Writing poetry is hard, first in finding the words for that amorphous
emotion or idea, and second (more difficult) in having the reader hear what I meant when what I said was not quite that... You seem not to have this problem.
posted by
Pat_B
on December 10, 2016 at 6:42 PM
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The second poem was great, I could see myself in it! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 10, 2016 at 5:38 PM
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I tried to write a new poem today.
So far it hasn't worked out.
So, instead I went out into the frigid cold with a spray bottle of window cleaner and some soft rags and washed all the filthy windows all around on my car. Sitting here writing this, I suddenly remembered that I didn't clean the dirt off of the headlights.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 10, 2016 at 5:15 PM
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Time to go and have a sleep and keep away from that Australian wine me thinks.
posted by
Kabu
on December 10, 2016 at 1:51 PM
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