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posted by
Annicita
on December 10, 2016 at 10:15 PM
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I think the ending is so true unless one is vigilant! sam 
posted by
sam444
on December 10, 2016 at 6:05 PM
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I like the use of imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 10, 2016 at 6:37 AM
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Quite cute.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 10, 2016 at 1:04 AM
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nicely done.
posted by
Kabu
on December 9, 2016 at 2:36 PM
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I like it.
posted by
Justi
on December 9, 2016 at 11:55 AM
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Some are that way.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 9, 2016 at 11:46 AM
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