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Wah, Dollyji
Loved it all, especially the last, "beyond the burden ... " . Excellent work! 
posted by
anib
on December 16, 2016 at 10:04 PM
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This is such an exquistive poem, if only we could all be in that place where we can forego reality and delve into the beauty that represents the world.
posted by
shobana
on December 11, 2016 at 4:28 AM
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You always come back with something special thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2016 at 9:03 AM
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That would be lovely....Beautiful imagery
posted by
Annicita
on December 9, 2016 at 6:03 AM
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That is a nice "If" to think about.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 8, 2016 at 10:16 PM
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Beyond the burden indeed! Grand poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 8, 2016 at 7:32 PM
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Beautiful... Welcome back
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on December 8, 2016 at 5:10 PM
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perhaps it will be that way on the other side of the bridge. it is wonderful to think so.
posted by
Kabu
on December 8, 2016 at 12:54 PM
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A very deep poem, I find this to be.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 8, 2016 at 6:35 AM
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Such lovely imagery Shama - an ideal place for sure.
posted by
shobana
on December 8, 2016 at 4:54 AM
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Such a land of the exotic would be so beautiful and peaceful. 
posted by
anib
on December 7, 2016 at 11:24 PM
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shamasehar
I love it! We'd all go there! Grab a surfboard... Beautiful.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on December 7, 2016 at 8:41 PM
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