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A very precious moment.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 7, 2016 at 5:37 AM
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Congratulations!! Wish you all the best with the book.
posted by
shobana
on November 7, 2016 at 3:56 AM
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um one actually is all I can see now. 5 lines from the end should read um I think she wished that she did not run from Mommy. The word Not is missing.
posted by
Kabu
on November 6, 2016 at 5:09 PM
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Annicita
A lovely wee story that could be real life.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 6, 2016 at 8:41 AM
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what errors?
posted by
Annicita
on November 6, 2016 at 8:36 AM
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Couple of little errors but I think it is perfect. It has a little message and repetitive words. Looks good to me.
posted by
Kabu
on November 6, 2016 at 8:06 AM
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Very good I would think for early readers.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 6, 2016 at 1:29 AM
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thanks for the feedback!
posted by
Annicita
on November 5, 2016 at 10:26 PM
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This is just about how it happened... Of course I love it! It may also be appropriate for even younger children.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 5, 2016 at 9:59 PM
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