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FSI

Yes you are right - basically it is a state of tranquility within oneself.

posted by shobana on November 3, 2016 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

Chuck

Didn't know that and thank you.

posted by shobana on November 3, 2016 at 5:01 AM | link to this | reply

Ciel

Hi Ciel, yes it is as you have described so well - a stage of release of fears and beliefs and in the path to divinity. Thank you.

posted by shobana on November 3, 2016 at 4:58 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

Thank you CC. Yes it is a silence that has to be experienced to transcend into

posted by shobana on November 3, 2016 at 4:53 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu

Yes I can understand that and its good that the mind is kept busy. Love you Kabu.

posted by shobana on November 3, 2016 at 4:49 AM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Yes indeed and to be in that state of divinity is sublime.

posted by shobana on November 3, 2016 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply

Aba

Yes silence does transcends into tranquility - well said aba. Thank you.

posted by shobana on November 3, 2016 at 4:34 AM | link to this | reply

This is an excellent thought put very nicely into poetry. I find silence is my nature. It makes me feel the richness of tranquility. 

posted by anib on November 2, 2016 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

shobana

Meditation, an attempt to approach a state akin to a Nirvana? 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 2, 2016 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

I have many silent periods  every day but the mind is busy. sometimes what my mind is mulling over I write doen sometimes not. Your poem really touched me.

posted by Kabu on November 2, 2016 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

Well it is said that silence is golden Shobana. I suppose it depends how one experiences it. If you can make it act to your benefit that is rather clever. Your poem gives us things to ponder over , nice to see your writing.

posted by C_C_T on November 2, 2016 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes silence and darkness are akin.

I think getting to that place where silence is sublime means going through a place of darkness, of veils and shadows that distort silence into alarming things. To get beyond them means getting past one's own inner veils of beliefs, shadows of fears... to transcend one's most human havings and doings and thinkings, etc, to reach the state of being, that is nearer to the divine.

posted by Ciel on November 2, 2016 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

They call it the scary world of silence 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on November 2, 2016 at 7:12 AM | link to this | reply

For some people, that sort of silence evokes a feeling of tranquility within oneself while for others, it evokes a feeing of inner turmoil. I guess it boils down to how in tune one is with other people that determines how one responds to such a state.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 2, 2016 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply