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Quite interesting Pat you get into the little crevices of life, I mustn't say much in case they are relatives.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 31, 2016 at 10:51 AM
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is this the outline for a nanowrimo entry?
posted by
Annicita
on October 31, 2016 at 10:31 AM
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OMG I wonder if there is "loot" somewhere. and I want to know why Dawn was able to be convinced to end her marriage and why she went so far away to restart her life. Lots of interesting issues here that over shadow the loss.
posted by
Kabu
on October 31, 2016 at 10:06 AM
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Pat
Like Ciel, I suspect there's more to this story! And in any case - it sounds as though there's more than enough for another novel...

posted by
Nautikos
on October 31, 2016 at 9:44 AM
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It sounds like there is a lot more to this story,
such as why Dawn really left Joe, and why Bill really freak out over the sale of the family home? I'm glad Willie and Bill reconciled.
posted by
Ciel
on October 31, 2016 at 7:44 AM
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