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Kabu
I'm sorry to hear that, maybe in time he will come around. You are such a lovable person and don't take anything to heart, he will see that one day.
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shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 5:17 AM
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CCT
Thank you CC - you are right
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 5:10 AM
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Naut
Yes I suppose it does Naut
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 5:09 AM
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FSI
Thank you.
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 5:07 AM
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KATRAY2
Thank you Katray - glad you liked.
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 4:58 AM
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TAPS
Thank you TAPS.
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 4:57 AM
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BCA
That's such a nice way of saying it. Thank you.
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 4:45 AM
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Wiley John
I do believe he does, thank you.
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 4:43 AM
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RPresta
Thank you so much, so happy you liked it
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2016 at 4:41 AM
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I agree, it's more than that... Such a lovely poem, shobana. Thought-provoking and the type that one reads a second time. So nice.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 18, 2016 at 8:08 PM
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Shobana
He hears all the whispers in your lovely poetry I think.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 18, 2016 at 6:57 PM
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A thought's created between a gap and prayer, filling it love.
posted by
BC-A
on October 18, 2016 at 4:30 PM
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This is really great. I loved it.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 18, 2016 at 3:32 PM
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Wonderfully thought evoking; nice work, Shobana..
posted by
Katray2
on October 18, 2016 at 3:14 PM
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I like how deep your poem is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 18, 2016 at 9:42 AM
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Shobana
An poem that taises interesting questions for believers...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 18, 2016 at 9:08 AM
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Well Shobana I expect those who believe expect more than that. A good thinking man's poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 18, 2016 at 8:58 AM
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It is more than that. God is a love that we cannot understand though I believe Mother love may be the closest we can get. i know that doesn't matter what Son #2 says or how he deliberately hurts me, I love him and hold him close in my heart.
posted by
Kabu
on October 18, 2016 at 8:46 AM
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