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Lovely 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 8, 2016 at 2:39 AM
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Unequalled in describing the real agony of having to face that it is over. Somehow without really knowing how come, it is over for him and I like the way you mention your shrinking heart. I think anyone who has faced this pain will really appreciate your words . It rings do true.
posted by
Kabu
on October 6, 2016 at 10:10 AM
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I really got into this one - read through it twice to get all the nuances.
I love astrophysics and this poem takes full advantage of the cosmic dance.
posted by
Pat_B
on October 6, 2016 at 9:52 AM
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It is tough when the feelings are not shared.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 6, 2016 at 8:47 AM
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Well I am glad you did not slide into a black hole Taps. There are plenty around, although your gentleman would probably have saved you. An honest poem which gives away or provides your inner strength, you know which.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 6, 2016 at 8:05 AM
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TAPS
Black holes in the galaxies, and black hearts... Never a good combo! But a great poem, TAPS!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 5, 2016 at 11:48 PM
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Re: Naut
Black holes have always fascinated me.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 5, 2016 at 10:13 PM
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TAPS
Love of galactic dimensions! Mind you, there lurks a black hole at the heart of many galaxies... 
posted by
Nautikos
on October 5, 2016 at 10:06 PM
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