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TAPS
☽The lines are pure, love. BC-A, Bill’sR👀st
posted by
BC-A
on September 29, 2016 at 4:49 PM
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A great use of metaphors in your poem to describe the vastness and intensity of that love.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 29, 2016 at 8:49 AM
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One should never forget those wonderful moments even if it was a love that ran its course...just best if you never have to meet again.
posted by
Kabu
on September 29, 2016 at 8:03 AM
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Well they are all sweet Taps a pity the gentleman is not here to read them.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2016 at 7:36 AM
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What beautiful imagery here and said so eloquently TAPS. Wonderful
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2016 at 6:30 AM
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What a hopeful poem.
posted by
Pat_B
on September 29, 2016 at 4:17 AM
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Beautiful poem 
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 28, 2016 at 10:27 PM
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TAPS
Most excellent!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 28, 2016 at 9:04 PM
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Re: Naut
I am finding that these old poems I wrote years ago are quite lacking and am having to spend quite a bit of effort into bringing them up to par. Thank you for your encouraging comments.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 28, 2016 at 9:04 PM
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TAPS
The images, the rythms, the sentiments expressed - SUPERB!
posted by
Nautikos
on September 28, 2016 at 8:51 PM
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