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your love poem series are splendid.
I knew a lady ...now gone to greener pastures who kept her man waiting. When she arrived for lunch there he was an anxious look on his face.
"I'm only a half hour late" she said.
" And a day" he replied.
posted by
Kabu
on September 29, 2016 at 8:01 AM
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I love your rich style in writing 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 28, 2016 at 10:28 PM
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TAPS
Another excellent poem! You'vr beautifully traced the changes in your reaction to his lateness, from simple impatience through anger and finally fear, all resolved in the end through love...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 28, 2016 at 8:46 PM
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thanks for everything you do, write, pray here ... anywhere
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on September 28, 2016 at 5:24 PM
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TAPS
This has imagery with feeling.
posted by
BC-A
on September 28, 2016 at 3:10 PM
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Wow, nice work...
If someone had kept me waiting for all that time I'm pretty sure I wouldn't have been so nice about it.
posted by
Pat_B
on September 28, 2016 at 10:03 AM
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Very nice Taps ,it is not often that a lady will admit to such feelings. I suppose she might feel she would be compromised.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 28, 2016 at 7:12 AM
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Each stanza with its emotions jump out at me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 28, 2016 at 7:06 AM
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Oh I would like the post that could follow this lovely poem.
posted by
Justi
on September 27, 2016 at 10:19 PM
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TAPS
Oh, this is so real. He must have had a very good explanation... Very good poem, I felt it! Like it was me waiting!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 27, 2016 at 10:08 PM
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