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posted by BC-A on September 23, 2016 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

oh Taps this is just so beautiful, I went along with you on this walk thru the woods, I am lost for words to tell how beautiful this poem is, and the ending is so grand and so true, oh nature is a great teacher if we pay attention and want to learn, thanks for sharing this beautiful piece, I think I will read it again, may God bless

posted by Riversidepoet on September 23, 2016 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

I am loving this time of the year.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 23, 2016 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS

This is such a good, real poem! Kudos to you! It's a fun and entertaining read. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on September 22, 2016 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderfully done, TAPS!

posted by Katray2 on September 22, 2016 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

What a delight, Taps.

I especially like the final quatrain - it could stand on its own, but the rest is so evocative...

posted by Pat_B on September 22, 2016 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Thank you.  I worked on that on all morning.  I'm not quick anymore.

posted by TAPS. on September 22, 2016 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

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LOL.  I don't think I can even skip anymore.

posted by TAPS. on September 22, 2016 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS

Beautiful - and poignant!

posted by Nautikos on September 22, 2016 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

I expect you feel like a little fairy skipping through this lovely poem. Wake me when it is spring Buttercup.

posted by C_C_T on September 22, 2016 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

I just love this...relate to it as well. there is fun and wisdom here.

posted by Kabu on September 22, 2016 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply