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posted by NocrossJustchristmas on September 28, 2016 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

The romantic note in your poems has a way, so perfectly gelled with feelings that words floow spontaneously. Well done, dear Shobs. 

posted by anib on September 17, 2016 at 10:18 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Thank you.

posted by shobana on September 17, 2016 at 12:55 AM | link to this | reply

Chuck

Thank you.

posted by shobana on September 17, 2016 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

FSI

Yes its beautiful to see the constellation of stars. It does soothe the eye.

posted by shobana on September 17, 2016 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

Thanks CC, great to invoke memories and reminisce sometimes.

posted by shobana on September 17, 2016 at 12:53 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu

Thank you Kabu - sometimes one has to be reminded of the beauty the world has to offer.

posted by shobana on September 17, 2016 at 12:52 AM | link to this | reply

The word Spitfire does remind me of the bravery of the fly boys who died so bravely for world peace and your poem of lying peacefully watching those shooting stars and twinkling lights also reinds me of the Universe, so much larger than us and the misery we can inflict on each other. Well done dear one.

posted by Kabu on September 16, 2016 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply

I like this Shobana it brings back memories, when little if we saw a Spitfire zooming across the sky,`we felt safe. I expect the feeling still exists way out in your stars.

posted by C_C_T on September 16, 2016 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

There are is something so soothing about looking at those stars so many light years away.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 16, 2016 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem with beautiful imagery  Thanks for sharing.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on September 16, 2016 at 1:08 AM | link to this | reply

So delightfully well-composed and romantic! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on September 16, 2016 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply