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Re: Annicita
Thank you very much!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 16, 2016 at 7:58 PM
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lovely
posted by
Annicita
on August 16, 2016 at 3:07 PM
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Re: Lanetay
Yes, it is. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 15, 2016 at 10:43 AM
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Re: Nautikos
Thank you, Naut. Then I have done my job with this one! But it's only a poem. In a sense, it could portray, at one time or another, any of us, or all of us, but not none of us... 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 15, 2016 at 10:42 AM
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very deep poem
posted by
Lanetay
on August 15, 2016 at 7:19 AM
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RP
Haunting - like a love one wants to forget but cannot...
posted by
Nautikos
on August 14, 2016 at 8:54 PM
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Riversidepoet
Thank you for reading, and for your very, very nice comment. The same to you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 14, 2016 at 8:00 PM
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a wonderful picture you have painted here, so well done, many great lines and images, it captured me from beginning to end, thanks for sharing, may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on August 14, 2016 at 1:03 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Aba
Hah! Well, yes, there are those who like it when I am speechless!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 11:49 PM
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Re: Re: Aba
Your beng speechless makes me .
posted by
anib
on August 13, 2016 at 9:44 PM
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Re: Re: Aba
Your beng speechless makes me .
posted by
anib
on August 13, 2016 at 9:44 PM
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Re: Katray2
Thank you, and as is true of much of your writing also. Also, I can identify with your post today very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 9:20 PM
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Re: Katray2
Thank you, and as is true of much of your writing also. Also, I can identify with your post today very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 9:20 PM
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Beautiful and profound, RPRresta!
posted by
Katray2
on August 13, 2016 at 8:52 PM
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Re: BC-A
I suppose it does. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 8:44 PM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you, BC-A.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 8:43 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Interesting observation, Wiley. Perhaps surreal... LOL.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 8:42 PM
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Re: Kabu
Yes, there are some wonderful poets here, and you are one of them! So thank you very much. So kind of you to say those nice things.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 8:41 PM
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Re: FSI
All in a day's work! :)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 8:40 PM
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💮This poem gives lots of feeling love. BC-A, Bill’s R👀st
posted by
BC-A
on August 13, 2016 at 1:39 PM
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In this poem there's a touch of both love, and then hurt. But it's excellent.
posted by
BC-A
on August 13, 2016 at 1:37 PM
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RPresta
The Wraith seemed more real than ethereal but lively and poetic.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 13, 2016 at 12:59 PM
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There are some absolutely wonderful poets here on Blogit. We who love poetry and TRY everynow and then to write, appreciate so much tour amazing abilities and of course the ending of this poem is a amazing work.
posted by
Kabu
on August 13, 2016 at 10:09 AM
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A bit of a haunting image there at the end.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 13, 2016 at 4:57 AM
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Re: shamasehar
Thank you, shamasehar, so very much. Your comment is also much appreciated.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 12:53 AM
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Re: Aba
Oh, my goodness! Many thanks for your generous and kinds compliments, dear Aba. I am speechless, for once! I do appreciate it very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 13, 2016 at 12:51 AM
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The shadow of images playing with words so beautifully here and the close was superb.
posted by
shamasehar
on August 13, 2016 at 12:08 AM
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Dearest Presta my friend
EXCEPTIONALLY EXQUISITE! The whole poem with its lovely cadence resonates. One of your best, imho. The title WRAITH gels so well with the memorable concluding lines: and while this was you, you never knew it was me, too. 
Kudos!
posted by
anib
on August 12, 2016 at 11:04 PM
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