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Re: WileyJohn
Thank you for your kind compliment, Wiley.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 13, 2016 at 11:39 AM
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RPresta
Lovely rhyming Haiku
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 13, 2016 at 8:36 AM
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Re: BC-A
Yes, it is nice after the heat.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 12, 2016 at 7:18 PM
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Re: Lanetay
For you, I especially hope for cooler weather! It can be a blast furnace there!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 12, 2016 at 7:17 PM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. And I hope it cools down where you are also. We are supposed to get a hot spell - someday...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 12, 2016 at 7:16 PM
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Re: Kabu
Ooh, sorry! Hope it cools down for you. Thunderstorms can be scary. Oh, and thank you for the compliment, S. Sister.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 12, 2016 at 7:15 PM
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But, it's a nice night after heat.
posted by
BC-A
on July 12, 2016 at 3:26 PM
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only if that was true here
posted by
Lanetay
on July 12, 2016 at 12:34 PM
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Beautiful. I love it, even though it is difficult for me to imagin right now. It has been so hot and muggy here, even at night. Though they do predict that a little cooler weather is coming for a bit.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 12, 2016 at 12:12 PM
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having a hot spell here but thundestorms abound. love your Haiku.
posted by
Kabu
on July 12, 2016 at 10:56 AM
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Re: C_C_T
We may all pay later...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 12, 2016 at 10:55 AM
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Re: Nautikos
Okay. I wonder if rhyming would also make Japenese poetry read with a sing-song sound? Kinda like this sentence... LOL!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 12, 2016 at 10:55 AM
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Hm' I am afraid we are being treated like this in the middle of summer. I'll just think winter and see what happens. Good example.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 12, 2016 at 10:01 AM
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Re: Re: Nautikos
There's no need to change anything, LOL...It's simply a debate! Japanese haiku rarely if ever rhyme, but it has been suggested that's because many Japanese words end on an 'a' or an 'n', and rhyming would introduce a boring monotony...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 12, 2016 at 7:57 AM
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Re: FSI
It could be.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 12, 2016 at 7:11 AM
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Re: Nautikos
I don't know if it is allowed or not. Do any Japanese poems rhyme? Don't know. I would think it is not in the generally accepted format or rules. (I shall no doubt be banned from eating Tempura shrimp for a week as punishment!) LOL. However, my mind works that way on these. Perhaps counting syllables activates a rhyming pattern in my brain. I could rework it with no rhyme...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 12, 2016 at 7:09 AM
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What a lovely feeling.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 12, 2016 at 4:56 AM
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RP
Very interesting! Among other things, it brings to mind the whole debate: Is rhyme allowed or not?
posted by
Nautikos
on July 12, 2016 at 3:35 AM
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Re: Re: anibanerjee
Thank you! Very cute. I wish the sightless had sight. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 11, 2016 at 11:42 PM
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Re: anibanerjee
Thanks!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 11, 2016 at 11:37 PM
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Re: Hi Presta the great
With sight, LOL 
posted by
anib
on July 11, 2016 at 9:34 PM
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Hi Presta the great
Yes indeed, the opposites bite and leave the sightless without sight.
posted by
anib
on July 11, 2016 at 9:32 PM
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