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Well you have made George a sicko, and Fiona a victim. A fairly true account of many Marriages in the past. Although a girl once told me she wanted ten children. Yes I said they are a little blessing. I think she only got up to eight.

posted by C_C_T on July 3, 2016 at 1:14 AM | link to this | reply

Pat

That's powerfully written...

posted by Nautikos on July 2, 2016 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

it's really sad...real life at times, and this reads like real life. One feels emotions for all the characters.

posted by Kabu on July 2, 2016 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply