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posted by
BC-A
on June 10, 2016 at 3:22 PM
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I could just hear that poem recited to a group, a piano accompaniment,
it's so rhythmical and rhyming... I didn't know you could rap! Nice work!
posted by
Pat_B
on June 10, 2016 at 4:59 AM
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Loved it. As I was reading this post the door bell rang, I opened the door to see the milkman busy on his touch screen... modern ways :)
posted by
shamasehar
on June 9, 2016 at 10:34 PM
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TAPS
I love it! All you need to do is change the last line of the first stanza a bit, after reading it carefully, LOL...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 9, 2016 at 8:34 PM
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The technology came about so fast, too, and continues to evolve at a rapid rate.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 9, 2016 at 4:53 PM
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Oh, I loved this poem so much. It's all so true. I think for our grandparents it must have also seemed that the world had changed from when they were quite young until they grew older. You nailed it with this one, sweet lady! Perfect.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 9, 2016 at 10:24 AM
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such a different World, slower paced and for me, happier. and when I travelled, contact with Australia was written on aerogrammes, postcards and if urgent the dreaded telegramme. Love your poem.
posted by
Kabu
on June 9, 2016 at 10:17 AM
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This is funny a thought proving Taps. Probably some of the best days illuminated, of course you would not beleive me I said you were the prettiest,a bit sad isn't it.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 9, 2016 at 10:00 AM
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