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Re: Re: Re: Kabu

Hah ha! So true, S. Sister.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 19, 2016 at 10:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

actually it is probably because trivia and hurtful comments have no interest for us.

posted by Kabu on May 15, 2016 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

Re:BC-A

Indeed. And therein lies the paradox of the story! Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 13, 2016 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

But, the backstory helped us appreciate him love. Excellent.

posted by BC-A on May 13, 2016 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Thank you, and I figured as much about the gossiping. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 13, 2016 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Same here, Kabu. Guess I never developed the "knack" for it! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 13, 2016 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re:C_C_T

Glad you liked it. I probably could salute correctly... However, this is a metaphor of sorts. I said we were 'as soldiers.' Sorry if it was misleading. Not military, no uniform; I would have wimped out on day one!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 13, 2016 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Thanks, TAPS. Glad it wasn't boring. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 13, 2016 at 12:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Lanetay

I must admit, it's hard to top one like that in gossip-land!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 13, 2016 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thank you, but I don't know much more of the story than that! I surely never asked... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 13, 2016 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Loved your prose and I never gossip.

posted by WileyJohn on May 13, 2016 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

all my life dear one I have been the last at work or elsewhere to hear the gossip. Guess they knew I was more interested in other things and wouldn't pass it on, perhaps with embellishments.

posted by Kabu on May 13, 2016 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply

Now I can't help imagining you in your uniform standing to attention as your new CO appraises your stance. I love this writing or whatever you call it, It grips to the end. I hope you can salute correctly.  

posted by C_C_T on May 13, 2016 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

Now that was a grabbing tale that held on unto the end.  Nothing a bit boring about that. 

posted by TAPS. on May 12, 2016 at 10:29 PM | link to this | reply

and the gossip gets exciting

posted by Lanetay on May 12, 2016 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

RP

A fascinating tale that calls out for more digging and exploration...

posted by Nautikos on May 12, 2016 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Oh, thank you very much. It is my first love, in writing... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 12, 2016 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

You have me wanting to read more prose from you.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 12, 2016 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply