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This is one of your best--
Especially the last lines!
posted by
Ciel
on May 4, 2016 at 9:56 AM
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My ex did Charlie's job, and was real good at it. He had a knack for reading which way to fell a tree too. I guess that's about all they had in common.
Love the story!
posted by
adnohr
on May 3, 2016 at 6:47 PM
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Well that was a good one Pat. I guess it happens but we rarely notice the ordinary things in life. Nice tale.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 3, 2016 at 12:35 PM
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Those were quite the days to experience. It is always interesting to read how people come across one another.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 3, 2016 at 9:38 AM
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A fantastic story and so well done. I was so worried that our hero would fall from the tree and ruin his life but it is such a change from life today to read of a couple living all their lives in love.
posted by
Kabu
on May 3, 2016 at 8:09 AM
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Pat
Very well written! The description of Charlie's work as a topper is superb, and one gets a real sense of the couple's intense attraction for one another even from these short passages! Are we gonna get more? 
posted by
Nautikos
on May 3, 2016 at 7:40 AM
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