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Hi Marta, the last three lines of the poem is very touching and evocative. Well done!

How have you been? I am now teaching Literature in a University.

posted by anib on May 22, 2016 at 12:51 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes

Very poignant.

posted by 2Philomena on May 10, 2016 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply

Ive missed you Most excellent poem

posted by skye08 on May 5, 2016 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

Great to see you back. Lovely poem.

posted by shamasehar on May 5, 2016 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

šŸŽØSound fills life love. Ā Billā€™s RšŸ‘€st

posted by BC-A on May 5, 2016 at 9:05 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful. If we but see...if we but hear... Ā 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 3, 2016 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

Such a sweet poem Simone , I always think of the gentleĀ sea when you write.

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2016 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Been a long time, Sinome. Great to see you posting a poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 3, 2016 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

I cannot believe our lovely Simone has popped back in. Oh but I miss your lovely poetry and long to know how things have been for you. (smothering your dear person with cuddles and little kisses )

posted by Kabu on May 3, 2016 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

Hi Marta !!

Great to see ya back on here !! And such true words in your entree..the why of a tear can be as important as the when..

posted by Raysongs on May 2, 2016 at 11:59 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful! It is so nice to come in and read you again.

posted by adnohr on May 2, 2016 at 11:42 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

First of all - Welcome back! I've missed you, and so have many others, I'm sure! And I do like the way this poem leads up to and stressesĀ the importance of the subtle message...

posted by Nautikos on May 2, 2016 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply