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Re: TAPS

Me too! I do believe he was that. Just the bits and pieces weave a web of interest for me... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thanks! Funny, I had Venice on my mind today. Yes, he sure does sound like that, but this was my maternal grandfather, not my Italian side. He was partly Polish, and was said be part Gypsy. Never knew him, the family was very illusive. A second cousin had hired an investigator, and still was unable to get too much background info! Now it is getting easier to trace them, especially if one speaks Polish...LOL!   

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

What an interesting man.  Makes me want to know more about him.

posted by TAPS. on April 12, 2016 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

RP

Well done! He sounds like some Bravo in Renaissance Venice...

posted by Nautikos on April 12, 2016 at 8:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re:WileyJohn

Thanks. I would have liked to have known him. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

You've hit it on the head with your assessment of the man, I feel. His is a story I would love to unravel. I am thrilled that you liked this poem. It means so much to hear your opinion, Sister Soul, Sister Spirit. Thank you.   

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 1:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Yes, one of his jobs was that of detective. He must have had a soft spot, for he married my widowed grandmother, who had 5 children under 10, and raised them, as they say, and they then had 6 children of their own. She was known for her kindness and gentle ways. I never knew either of them.   

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

A lovely tribute to a loved grandpa.

posted by WileyJohn on April 12, 2016 at 12:54 PM | link to this | reply

You have wowed me yet again and I am thrilled with this poem. It is dark and mysterious and of a man of few words I feel. One with a job to do and he did it. But your writing is very special sweet Sister Soul.

posted by Kabu on April 12, 2016 at 11:44 AM | link to this | reply

 I take it that Grandfather was a enforcement Office in a rather demanding role. Your dear Grandmother was a flowery person obviously. I suppose the hand that rocks the cradle rules the world. Nice imagery and very interesting.

posted by C_C_T on April 12, 2016 at 11:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

You imagine correctly. Actually, he had many - stories. Looking at documents on which he provided info, he was somehow able to be born in four different places... And that's just for a start! LOL! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lanetay

I have heard he could be quite scary. LOL. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 11:23 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Katray2

Thanks, I didn't plan it to be that, but I do believe it turned out that way. They write themselves, to a degree. This was an attempt at the style of poem where the first line repeats as the second line of the second stanza, and then is the third line of the third stanza, finishing as the fourth line of the fourth and final stanza; a bit of a quatrain. :) With free form, for me, thoughts flow much more easily.   

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Raysongs

Wow! I really appreciate you taking the time to say that. Thank you for the kind words, and for the cash! LOL! Honored that you found them worth taking the time to read, and hope a few brought a bit of enjoyment to ya'll.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Raysongs

Survival was paramount, yes. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 12, 2016 at 11:09 AM | link to this | reply

I imagine he would have quite the story to tell.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 12, 2016 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

dark fire sounds spooky

posted by Lanetay on April 12, 2016 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

Strong and well written descriptions or character study, if that is the

correct term..:)

posted by Katray2 on April 12, 2016 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply

Okay, MS R. Presta, you got me hooked

just spent the last hour reading all of your entries...you probably made at least an additional 43 cents now. Loved so many of them, I thought I would just say well done here.

posted by Raysongs on April 12, 2016 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

Sounds like many of his generation

It took a dark side to deal with dark times. Nice description, can picture in my mind..

posted by Raysongs on April 12, 2016 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply