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I love how you are building things between Colton and Joy...I like the name of Colton, too.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 29, 2016 at 9:55 AM
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great start
posted by
Annicita
on March 28, 2016 at 6:53 PM
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You really have the touch to get the reader interested in your work right off the bat. Do we get to have another chapter?
posted by
TAPS.
on March 28, 2016 at 6:27 PM
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Pat
Well written! Though I must confess that my interest in a woman would diminish to zero the second she addressed me as 'man', LOL...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 28, 2016 at 12:28 PM
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Never heard of that ring Pat . A good start though, personally I would not have used that torrid suggestion, but I suppose I am thinking of the hygiene aspect. Or how I would behave.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 28, 2016 at 10:37 AM
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Pat you are a master mistress writer. I just love you. Wonder how many will understand.
posted by
Kabu
on March 28, 2016 at 9:37 AM
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PatB
A priceless post, enjoyed it very much. LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 28, 2016 at 9:16 AM
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PatB
A priceless post, enjoyed it very much. LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 28, 2016 at 9:15 AM
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