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Those daemons cause quite the battle.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 15, 2016 at 9:48 AM
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Updated Version
I didn't think it possible to like this trilogy any more than I already did, but this version updated, I LOVE! Solo il Maestro può migliore il lavoro del Maestro!
"...and to him was given a Soul in which lay the seed of his splendor...and his fall." Genius in how apropos your closing statement is to your poem, both separately read, and to the three pieces of the Trilogy as a whole! Bravo, Cugino mio! Excellently crafted.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 13, 2016 at 5:29 PM
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Intriguing Joe, but I hope I never meet the bloody critturs. Good poetry
posted by
C_C_T
on March 13, 2016 at 11:47 AM
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Longo-Geremia, Caro Cugino,
Bellissimo! Your word choice and presentation of this series of artistic gems speak of time before time, of hope despite despair, the paradox of life; good and evil! Magnificently told, masterful in an esoteric way. Your spirit shines, cugino mio! Thank you. Do continue, please.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 13, 2016 at 10:33 AM
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