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Yes a lot of women have been taken in by sweet words and foolishly given money to scoundrels. Your poem depicts the scenario.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2016 at 11:33 AM
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Well expressed reality of tragedy!
Nice work; welcome! 
posted by
Katray2
on February 15, 2016 at 10:15 AM
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This flows very well and it describes your subject perfectly. And yes, I think this could be set to music.
posted by
EJ_Norris
on February 15, 2016 at 9:21 AM
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