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I can only say one word and it is descriptive.
posted by
Paddington
on March 4, 2016 at 9:44 AM
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can I be so bold as to make a suggestion which you can ignore or use?
how about ending the last line with ..... within that breeze 
posted by
Annicita
on January 9, 2016 at 11:07 AM
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It's beautiful to me. "La Bella Vita" (Life is Beautiful)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 7, 2016 at 12:32 PM
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great imagery and you sent me shivering with anticipation. of....I am not sure what.
posted by
Kabu
on January 7, 2016 at 8:33 AM
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You have a great imagination Doody.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 7, 2016 at 7:13 AM
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I can see the images unfold.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 7, 2016 at 5:52 AM
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