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posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 7, 2016 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

You convey the fear felt very well in your poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 30, 2015 at 6:37 AM | link to this | reply

So many elderly folk are a burden to their loved ones. You have shared that burden Joe as we all know. I am sure that there is a place somewhere where your love will be recognised.Feel proud you have done what others were too weak to do.

posted by C_C_T on December 30, 2015 at 3:33 AM | link to this | reply

It could be because they themselves are afraid.  Fear can do that to people.

posted by TAPS. on December 29, 2015 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

now that I am older they very often don't see me either. My place at a family social event, even walking through the mall seems to be invisible to others and they get annoyed if I don't remain mute.

posted by Kabu on December 29, 2015 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply