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nice one patb
posted by
Annicita
on December 27, 2015 at 9:25 PM
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Wow - so few words to turn the reader's heart upside down! Brilliant poem, Pat-B, even in its stark desperate longing. Sending you a hug.
posted by
adnohr
on December 27, 2015 at 2:56 PM
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PatB
Got me right in my depression!!
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 27, 2015 at 1:28 PM
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Potent, sadly reality is sometimes less disturbing.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 27, 2015 at 12:11 PM
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Pat
Christmas is meant to be a time of joy - but I know from experience it is also a time of sadness...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 27, 2015 at 10:21 AM
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sometimes one has done all that they are supposed to do. Beautiful writing.
posted by
Kabu
on December 27, 2015 at 10:20 AM
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