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Thanks WeatheredLight. Glad you enjoyed.
posted by
EJ_Norris
on December 7, 2015 at 2:42 PM
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You're a word artist - for sure. I like the last sentence in your second paragraph the best. It's sticking with me this morning.
posted by
WeatheredLight
on December 7, 2015 at 7:41 AM
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Indeed FormerStudentIntern
posted by
EJ_Norris
on December 6, 2015 at 3:35 PM
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Figured this particular one was mediocre. But, my vperceptions of my own work are often warped so you all were my little guinea pigs 
Thanks for the cretique
posted by
EJ_Norris
on December 6, 2015 at 3:34 PM
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No problem at all, lovelyladymonk. Stop by my corner of writing land anytime and thanks for the compliment :)
posted by
EJ_Norris
on December 6, 2015 at 3:32 PM
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You write beautifully, EJ. This is brilliant and I look forward to more. Thank you for visiting me.
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on December 6, 2015 at 1:35 PM
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EJ. It is good poetry inasmuch as it is understandable. Anyone can write without meaning. I could say bird that is absurd unless you mean an Eagle but that would be illegal. Or a leaf but you are the chief on this site so I might just say nice once or twice if you prefer and never purr. I know the feeling.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 5, 2015 at 6:58 AM
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What a wonderful feeling to feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 5, 2015 at 5:33 AM
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