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I know I like to kill them quickly in a good trap not poision them adnohr. Yes pretty true and he was a prisoner of war, as thin as a herring.

posted by C_C_T on November 30, 2015 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS

Yes ironically most of the mill workers children were offered a scholarship, makes one think.

posted by C_C_T on November 30, 2015 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: ChiffChaff

Well as long as they last a few years Bro. Must always try to do better.

posted by C_C_T on November 30, 2015 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Taps

Well I was using nobble in a wide context. It is a handy little word. 

posted by C_C_T on November 30, 2015 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Justi

Thank you Justi. I would like a cat but it is the birds you see. Did your lost cat ever return? I cannot remember you saying so. 

posted by C_C_T on November 30, 2015 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

Who cares if these are old, I love them. You need some cats. Just put what comes up on that page and forget about whether we have read it. Your work deserves more than one read.

posted by Justi on November 29, 2015 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

I had to look up "nobble".  We don't use that here. 

posted by TAPS. on November 29, 2015 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

"A penalty to pay for growing old..."   That sounds worse than paying taxes.

posted by TAPS. on November 29, 2015 at 3:23 PM | link to this | reply

ChiffChaff

You just can't write poetry that has a lifetime, they're good enough to last forever Bro.

posted by WileyJohn on November 29, 2015 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

I like the way in which the emotions flow in the poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 29, 2015 at 5:26 AM | link to this | reply

I have a problem killing the little mice too - but sometimes it's hard to teach them that they cannot share my space! What a poignant poem, CCT. Sad but lovely. Maybe he was a recognized artist in his next life.

posted by adnohr on November 28, 2015 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply