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I find making up steps as I go leads to some of the most exciting parts. It's fun when the story surprises you just as much as a reader. :)
posted by
EJ_Norris
on October 6, 2015 at 12:50 PM
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Glad you enjoyed Kabu. It'll be fun to start something else :)
posted by
EJ_Norris
on October 6, 2015 at 12:45 PM
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Yes I quite enjoyed your story, you had the disadvantage of writing it as you skipped along. So you managed to twist and shake your characters into the role that would be acceptable. 
posted by
C_C_T
on October 6, 2015 at 10:16 AM
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Just as the ending should be. I so enjoyed this story. Thank you.
posted by
Kabu
on October 6, 2015 at 9:43 AM
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