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Sadie and Rosie were lovers blah blah blah love.

posted by BC-A on September 27, 2015 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply

I love how you ended this entry, making the reader looking super forward to the next installment.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 27, 2015 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, this is delicious. And Hursel is a giant among men, dealing with

what could be a knotty problem in a wise, straightforward way. Nothing like an honest man! Ever.  A fiction writer could not find such wonderful descriptive names for invented characters than you've got right there in your family. Loving this!

posted by Pat_B on September 27, 2015 at 4:15 AM | link to this | reply

Sadie needed to control, but Hursel was intelligent enough to realize a relationship between them would be bad for both. Loving this story!.

 

posted by adnohr on September 26, 2015 at 11:59 PM | link to this | reply

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Well.....I just went back and got ALL caught up!!!  What a wonderful story and what a great recall you have!  I have wonderful photo's from when my mom and dad fell in love and they are almost film noir type things....and they basic story is great...but I don't know all the detail like you have here and reading this has made me wish I did.  What a treasure you are creating for your family to have!  I sure hope you are printing it or putting it on a flash or something so they will always have it.  You are such a talented writer, Betty....you are succinct but still get the emotion and texture in there.  I'd give anything to be able to write like this.

posted by Krisles on September 26, 2015 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

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What a scene! Hursel showed courage, and in the end it was clearly the best way to handle that awkward situation! :) (Sorry, no rose today - tech probs)

posted by Nautikos on September 26, 2015 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

Oh well if you are going to be a Bitch then a man can get very sick of the tantrums and find himself a sweet Rose. Cause, it works the other way too. LOL.

posted by Kabu on September 26, 2015 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

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That is so sad they broke up is how I feel love.

posted by WileyJohn on September 26, 2015 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply