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True and in less abbrieviated writing circumstances I'd add a heck of a lot more. :) For now, the fact that it's royal orders bringing him out and castle security preventing any assasination will have to do. Glad to see I have successfully stirred hatred for the bad guy. I'm usually pretty good at that. Dress down for the king just a part or two ahead.
posted by
EJ_Norris
on September 7, 2015 at 5:10 AM
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Yes it is well written, I think discriminating readers might ask how a prisoner was allowed to be released so easily. Of course it could be a cunning plot to kill the king, hopefully.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 7, 2015 at 1:10 AM
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Thanks, glad you're enjoying :)
posted by
EJ_Norris
on September 6, 2015 at 3:05 PM
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still a most interesting read.
posted by
Kabu
on September 6, 2015 at 3:01 PM
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