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Kabu
on September 2, 2015 at 7:42 PM
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Hahahahahahaha!!! No worries, I'm not going to annihilate you. Criticism is an equally important part of becoming a solid and mature writer. What you said was honest, constructive, and often correct. In fantasy stories many times doctors are called healers. But, in my reading habits I've noticed that not all writers completely exclude the term either. I've seen healer, doctor, physician, medicine man etc. I agree he'll need an actual name though. I'll bring that in a little later maybe. :) This one's still very much in the epiramental stages. Thanks for your help.
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EJ_Norris
on September 2, 2015 at 12:02 PM
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OK. It is just the doctor as soon as I read doctor I thought no not doctor. Healer or even wizard or a fictitious name for the guy it kind of jars. I realize there is a limit to plots, but this is quite interesting so far, of course if you enjoy doing it what matters, take no notice of what I say. Nobody else does. I would not bother if I thought it was rubbish.
Every time anyone dares to criticize here they usually get murdered, so do not tell anyone please. I have written this in invisible Pixie ink.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 2, 2015 at 11:51 AM
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Say on
posted by
EJ_Norris
on September 2, 2015 at 11:27 AM
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This is quite OK , I don't know if you want critism or just praise, so I will just read on.
Not nasty critism, but just something that rankles and would put me off buying although I would be cheeky and read it for free.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 2, 2015 at 11:17 AM
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Glad you're enjoying. I'm interested to see where it goes myself :)
posted by
EJ_Norris
on September 2, 2015 at 10:36 AM
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Glad you're enjoying :)
posted by
EJ_Norris
on September 2, 2015 at 10:35 AM
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I am enjoying myself too, reading your story.
posted by
Kabu
on September 2, 2015 at 8:14 AM
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I am really enjoying reading your story. Very interesting.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 2, 2015 at 5:37 AM
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