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Re:bc-a

in this case dreams are the only contact i want.

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: annicita

yes and sleepless nights

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck

sadly nothing lasts

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: wiley

it wasnt really meant to be sad, but then when these things come to me in the middle of the night, all i really am is sleepy

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: cct

yes, i am working my way through, what i do not know, but you are right about promises rarely lasting.

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: v1

thanks, i am no poet, but enjoy giving it a try now and then

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: fsi

life is but a dream, or so the song says

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

naut

always making me take out my dictionary, lol

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: kabu

life is certainly change if nothing else, it just gets harder to accept change when you get older.

posted by overtherainbow on July 23, 2015 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

jeansaw

🐝A couple people in my past I dreamed of and in time some contact came true love. BC-A, Bill’s R👀st

posted by BC-A on July 20, 2015 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

dreams and memories can do that 

posted by Annicita on July 19, 2015 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

Good moments don't last long  nice poem

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on July 19, 2015 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

Jeansaw

Excellent however sad poem, blessings love.

posted by WileyJohn on July 19, 2015 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

One thing about this poem is one can dream with you and feel you working your way through promises that rarely last.  

posted by C_C_T on July 19, 2015 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

I enjoyed it. Why haven't you posted your poetry before?

posted by Vermont01 on July 19, 2015 at 5:51 AM | link to this | reply

Those times can truly feel like a dream.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 19, 2015 at 5:51 AM | link to this | reply

Jean

Very poignant...

posted by Nautikos on July 18, 2015 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

lessons that I was never taught when I was young...but definitely this poem describes life.Well done dear friend.

posted by Kabu on July 18, 2015 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply