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forget the stories, i see a book of poetry being published.
posted by
overtherainbow
on July 24, 2015 at 10:48 AM
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Re: Re: Thank you, Kabu.
posted by
Kabu
on July 21, 2015 at 11:10 AM
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Re: Thank you, for visiting BC-A.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 20, 2015 at 6:33 AM
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Re: Thank you, CCT.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 20, 2015 at 6:32 AM
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Re: Thank you, Kabu.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 20, 2015 at 6:31 AM
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Re: VT01
Thank you, Krisles.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 20, 2015 at 6:31 AM
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Re: Vt
Thank you, Naut.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 20, 2015 at 6:30 AM
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Re: Thank you, FSI.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 20, 2015 at 6:30 AM
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Re: Thank you, Chuck.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 20, 2015 at 6:29 AM
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Re: Thank you, Charcoal Heart
And yes, you are right. I guess I always thought--nothing money couldn't buy,
meaning a good editor. There is certainly a semicolon that could be questioned....
Although, I think of poetry writing as much more free to do what you want, compared
to other genres of writing. Thanks again, that is what we are here on Blogit for, to
better our skills and honest comments help that.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 20, 2015 at 6:29 AM
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Good job 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on July 19, 2015 at 6:23 PM
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The way you wrote this poem stuck out to me. You did a fantastic job and, as a poet myself, I very much enjoyed reading this work. The imagery was fantastic and, though I did find some punctual mistakes - sorry, I am big on stuff like that - I didn't see much wrong! A great write!
posted by
Charcoal_Jewel
on July 19, 2015 at 8:44 AM
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I like the way you went about writing this poem. Excellent.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 19, 2015 at 5:38 AM
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Vt
Well done! As Krisles says - very evocative! Cemeteries are faint echoes of people's lives...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 18, 2015 at 10:09 PM
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VT01
If you can find peace and perspective anywhere, I believe it is in a cemetery......I love them, always have. But, like Kabu, I doubt I'll end up in one....I don't care, what happens to my body once I die is up to my daughter - I've told her I truly don't care, and I don't. But your poem makes me wonder....wouldn't it be nice to have people enjoying those feelings, people I love or people I might, because they sense some lingering echo or think they do...and it adds something to their lives? I really like this.....very evocative🌺
posted by
Krisles
on July 18, 2015 at 4:00 PM
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Excellent, but don't bury me anywhere. Just shake my ashes free and I will float on the wind 'till I find my home.
posted by
Kabu
on July 18, 2015 at 3:01 PM
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The darker side of the new poet, I sometimes do walk the local cemetery V. Just to see who is neglecting who after giving them such adoration on the plaque. I like this one.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 18, 2015 at 10:36 AM
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💮Spoon Syrup Anthology in Vermont. BC-A, Bill’s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on July 18, 2015 at 7:22 AM
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