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makes me sad that i will not be here in 30-40 years to read another looking for.
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overtherainbow
on July 24, 2015 at 10:50 AM
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Re: Vt
Naut, thanks for reading.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 18, 2015 at 8:02 AM
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Thank you, Kabu.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 18, 2015 at 8:01 AM
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Thank you, FSI.
posted by
Vermont01
on July 18, 2015 at 8:00 AM
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A nice blend of haikus you have there, Vermont. I like'em all.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 18, 2015 at 5:08 AM
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well I liked them all including the first one. It appears to me that always and forever big cities where people have crammed themselves together too tight that fights and famine and have's and have nots dwell.
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Kabu
on July 17, 2015 at 12:30 PM
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Vt
Well...Let me just say about the first one that overly tendentious poetry doesn't work very well, especially if it's based on wrong assumptions. It reminds me of Club of Rome predictions of the '60s that have long since been refuted...The only thing that might be correct is that business of 'nonstop war', but then that too is nothing new if you take a look at history - there has virtually always war been going on somewhere! It's just that we are more aware of it now - 'instant' communication and all that...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 17, 2015 at 11:28 AM
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