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makes me sad that i will not be here in 30-40 years to read another looking for.

posted by overtherainbow on July 24, 2015 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

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Naut, thanks for reading.

posted by Vermont01 on July 18, 2015 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Kabu.

posted by Vermont01 on July 18, 2015 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, FSI.

posted by Vermont01 on July 18, 2015 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

A nice blend of haikus you have there, Vermont. I like'em all.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 18, 2015 at 5:08 AM | link to this | reply

well I liked them all including the first one. It appears to me that always and forever big cities where people have crammed themselves together too tight that fights and famine and have's and have nots dwell.

posted by Kabu on July 17, 2015 at 12:30 PM | link to this | reply

Vt

Well...Let me just say about the first one that overly tendentious poetry doesn't work very well, especially if it's based on wrong assumptions. It reminds me of Club of Rome predictions of the '60s that have long since been refuted...The only thing that might be correct is that business of 'nonstop war', but then that too is nothing new if you take a look at history - there has virtually always war been going on somewhere! It's just that we are more aware of it now - 'instant' communication and all that...

posted by Nautikos on July 17, 2015 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply

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