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You have me wondering what her response would be.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 15, 2015 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Vt

Naut, no, it wasn't intended to be poetry. I'm just throwing some stuff out there and

experimenting. As I look back at that letter I think it's more about getting old. My

friend also told me that if I want to feel young again I should start dating women that

are much younger.

posted by Vermont01 on July 15, 2015 at 4:53 AM | link to this | reply

are you just terrified of commitment I wonder. It is going to get very lonely when you do get old.

posted by Kabu on July 14, 2015 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

Vt

Interesting letter, especially beause of the ambiguous 'wrinkle' at the end...I'm not sure it's 'poetry', but it may not have been intended as such! And no, this is not the time to enter into a debate of what makes for poetry, LOL...

posted by Nautikos on July 14, 2015 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply

Oh! go on send it, just be sure you mean it and will never change your mind.

posted by C_C_T on July 14, 2015 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply