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Re: v1

OTR--I can't say yet. Maybe someone will figure it out.

posted by Vermont01 on July 5, 2015 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

v1

evil?

posted by overtherainbow on July 5, 2015 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

excellent, great poem that i really enjoyed. memories!!!!LOL.

posted by Kabu on July 5, 2015 at 3:34 PM | link to this | reply

A change of heart is needed 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on July 5, 2015 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

I wonder if she will change her perception of the speaker on account of his words.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 5, 2015 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

Vt

Interesting poem! The lady might even accept the invitation, as long as she doessn't mind that undercurrent of slight menace...

posted by Nautikos on July 4, 2015 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

Some of my dreams I'm glad they are impossible.  I have nightmares now and then.
Nice poem.

posted by TAPS. on July 4, 2015 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply